PoetryJanuary 22, 2007 4:18 pm
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Those last two couplets almost sound like a haiku.
Comment by Steve — January 22, 2007 @ 5:03 pm
I agree with the King…you got something with those last four lines…keep going with that.
Comment by fatcharlatan — January 23, 2007 @ 10:05 am
great capture of the ordinary!
Comment by Emily — January 28, 2007 @ 9:52 pm