Poem: The Door that Won’t Close
I can’t lock the front door
to my parents’ house.
I slam it closed,
but it swings open,
again and again.
I’m sucked inside,
across the immaculately vacuumed,
heavy Oriental rugs,
up the stairwell wallpapered like
a medieval castle of stone blocks, and
into my bedroom where I find waiting
my dolls of many nations, my Ladybug hairdryer
and sunny yellow trellised wallpaper
lush with pink roses.
My dolls stand on wooden bookshelves
stained walnut by my mother
before she screwed their standards into the wall.
Miss Italy and Miss Germany
seem to chat together,
perhaps about their common costume
of white blouse under jumper and apron.
I arrange all my dolls in alphabetical order and
conversational groupings.
At least this part of my life I can control.
Welcome to PT- I’m rather new, too actually.
I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for sharing. And thanks for stopping by even though I didn’t post a poem today.
Comment by ren.kat — November 23, 2006 @ 5:01 pm
The first stanza resonates, after that I have a ‘guy’ story. I can picture it all, good job
Comment by Mike Mc — November 23, 2006 @ 10:12 pm
This is a great poem, thanks for sharing it, especially today. It really resonanted with me: particularly because I am, this moment, writing from my parent’s house. I am very drawn to the first stanza: you word choice of “lock,” “slams,” “swings,” and “again and again” seem just perfect to me to conjure the myriad feelings involved in a relationship with ones parents. Great job.
Comment by Melissa — November 23, 2006 @ 10:29 pm
Yes, the first stanza draws you in and the follows up with great imagery. Nice poem!
Thanks for stopping by my blog! FYI, Mary Oliver is reading Nov 29 at the Cooledge Corner Theater. It looks like the event is sold out but I’ll try to get a few tickets.
Comment by January — November 23, 2006 @ 11:16 pm
Wow! I love this…such great, concrete images that evoke powerful emotions. You’ve been a blogging queen lately…I need to catch up!
Comment by Fat Charlatan — November 28, 2006 @ 12:20 pm