Poetry Thursday theme is my authentic self
For Poetry Thursday, I’m re-posting an old poem.
Wearing a Teen Model’s Dress
That white dress on the cover of Seventeen.
It smelled of cool girl
when peasant clothes were chic.
Black ribbon decorated with leaves and red flowers
yoked the chest and
braceleted the wrists with Cossack flair.
I could conquer the world –
a teenage boy’s heart –
in a dress from Seventeen.
Or so I thought.
I nagged Mom to buy it.
She finally shlepped me to Macy’s.
The dress called to me
from its metal pipe rack.
I ran my hand over the ribbon,
savoring the silky embroidery threads
and the virgin white cotton fabric.
No, not that one, said Mom.
White isn’t practical.
We’ll take the red.
It’s the same as the dress on the magazine,
Only the color diverges.
Maybe that’s why,
when I rose from my seat
at the dance to greet the boy,
he snickered and said
“No, not you.”
Oh so poignant. Is this really you? Or a part of you that you have carried? Such pain in those high school years. You captured it beautifully, between the dress, the mom, and the boy. My heart hurt. Well done!
Comment by jillypoet — September 22, 2006 @ 9:49 pm
Very nice. The emotion flows through the words
Comment by ptcakes — September 23, 2006 @ 4:55 am
Ooooh. I LOVE how you reworked this poem. Love the verbs “yoked” and “braceleted.” I can feel that virtual slap in the face…I’m right there with you. Very relatable. Nice work…have you sent this one out?
Comment by Fat Charlatan — September 24, 2006 @ 12:53 pm
Great poem! I really like this topic of navigating adolesence. Ending is sad but powerful.
Comment by Emily — October 7, 2006 @ 9:12 am
Mothers can be so cruel to their daughters about clothes. I remember similar scenes from my own adolescence.
Comment by Crafty Green Poet — October 7, 2006 @ 11:05 am